I must start using some of these suggestions! Thank you, E.J. Runyon for this lesson.
Telling sentences begin like this: I stand… Sara looks around… He waits with a… We wish … I sit here…Bob looks to the …
These are forms of you the writer telling the reader about the character. We can hear you saying these words. Your voice is at the forefront.
That may be fine for one line of narration. But to slip into scenes that show you have to make a shift in your writing. A writer’s voice needs to fade into the background. She needs to narrate her story from there.
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